Check it out, the party that i was supposed to do today got moved to june 27 so heres the new ad, btw how do u think this ad looks, its only my 2nd one so its probaly not that good.
I hope some of u can come, i need to sell 100 tickets from me, and total we have to sell 500 tickets. i havent sold any the other guys sold 150 so far, so someone please buy some tickets.
call 908-216-7663 for tickets.

Looks good...except you spelled Paradise, Paradice.
-AMP

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Originally posted by dj-amproductions:
[qb] Looks good...except you spelled Paradise, Paradice.
-AMP [/qb]

i didn't even realise that. i just read in a fast way and didn't notice it until you said something either.

thanx guys i din notice that either, thanx


any onther comments

do I need ID?

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Originally posted by BC:
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Originally posted by dj-amproductions:
[qb] Looks good...except you spelled Paradise, Paradice.
-AMP [/qb]

i didn't even realise that. i just read in a fast way and didn't notice it until you said something either. [/qb]

Yeah and you spelled realize, realise in this post. Otherwise it does look good. Good luck with your sellout.

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Originally posted by DJ Stevie Ray:
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Yeah and you spelled realize, realise in this post[/QB][/QUOTE]

Yeah Yeah....BC...sorry I didn't want to sound critical...just something i noticed

The flyer is...alright. Did you make it? If you did, what program did you use, and where did you get those backgrounds? If you've ever seen the flyers for House Nation and The Groove, put what they put on their flyers. You dont need tons of info. Basic stuff: where, when, cover, attire, DJ's, types of music, and anything else special enough. I wouldnt have put " " around 'graduation blowout' because it makes it seem less appealing, but this is just what I think. If you want, i can get my hands on some flyers, and you can get ideas from them. But it does look nice.

You can also just say "dress to impress" for the attire, and take out the "no id - no id" things across the top, bottom, and in the background. the headphones look kinda goofy, like its broken and bent in half. Again, this is just coming from someone who designs things like this as a real job, more than DJing.

I think the laguage at the end is not right. It is making it sound desperate. Like you arent selling of tickets.
Check out other flyers. They are Neat, S*xy like yours and ave stuff straight to de point.
Tickeks : $10 in advance $20 at the door.
Chick looks amazing!
If you know her where does she live and wats her no and age!

It looks amazing otherwise and best of luck man!

Cheers
MJ

Looks nice. I assume "NO ID" means "all ages", which is more common around here. Also, if there is alcohol, you might add "must be 21 with I.D. for drink stamp" or whatever. Some of us older types only attend if booze is available

And like someone mentioned, it probably doesn't need to mentioned but once. I like to know when a show ends, so if I can't make it early, I know whether it's worth putting on the schedule for later. Lastly, if there is a hotel nearby, you might be able to increase ticket sales with a package deal for rooms - especially if the hotel can provide a courtesy shuttle. In any case, good luck and have fun!